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The Abandoned Minesharft part1
As Zane slowly walked down the giant cave he heard a weird nose. It was pitch black or even darker without a torch. He realized that he was getting closer to the weird nose it sounded like a huge pack of zombies screaming,Spiders tip toeing along the wall,Skeletons shooting arrows. After a while he found where the noise was coming from......... IT WAS AN MINESHARFT!!!!. Zane was so shock he fell down the huge coal black hole and found himself in a zombie mob spawner he couldnt belive his own eyes when he saw an other person down here but who was it ? "Who are you?,Ive never seen you around the village" asked Zane the un known person said "You don't need to know who I am....for now." The person slowly turned around he or she had a faded white cloak with what it looked like blood stains all over the cloak,bright red eyes looking right into Zane's soul. He was scared even terrified by this so he tried to find a way out, but THERE WAS NO WAY OUT!!! "wha
That was an amazing story but next time can you check your punctuation. maybe you could add the other smoothie that you had.
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